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Yak, mungkin ada beberapa orang yang telah melihat blog ini sudah tau siapa pembuatnya dan siapa Author-nya. Yap, Hana Hakurou desu, The King of Wolves. Belum tau aku ? Kalau begitu, Kesini Dulu Ya~ ^^. Disini adalah tempat pelampiasan imajinasiku dan dibentuk menjadi FF (Fan Fiction). FF bisa bermacam-macam, ada FMA, Black Cat, Persona, dll. Aku harap kamu yang membaca FF ini bisa menikmatinya ! Bila ingin komentar atau ingin kasih kritik, tinggal ngomong ke SM (Shout Mix) yak ! Arigatou~

~ Hakurou

Senin, 03 Mei 2010

Stoicheio --- Chapter One

Little note: Sori ya udah lama gak ngelanjutin FF, tapi ini yang baru lagi, dan ini resmi akan dilanjutkan *plakgubrakbruaghmeong* Ok, let's Start!


Author: Masanda Hananisa (me) and Alyssa Syahmina (her main site's here)
Rating: T
Genre: Fantasy, a little bit comedy
Language: English

All the characters and storyline © Masanda Hananisa and Alyssa Syahmina
Credit for translation and improvement story goes to Alyssa Syahmina.

--Enjoy 8D

Stoicheio : Chapter 1st

Will Warren International High School, Paris, France. Last Period

- Pierce Finschoth’s Point of View -

This is so boring.

“Stop that Pierce, or I’ll give you detention like hell.”

I’m sitting at my seat in the back of the class, tapping my desk. Mr. Don, my English teacher, seems not happy about it. I put down my pencil and sit in silence before he can say another swear word with his Texas’s Cowboy accent.

“Good, don’t want to clean the whole school hallways aren’t you, boy? Now, let’s continue our lesson…. Where were we?”

He continues to lecture the class; I yawn and look outside the window. My class is pretty neat and big, with 40 seats divided in 4, 10 seats front to the back. My seat is the closest to the window.

I can see the school gate from here, and near the horizon, Paris’s very own Eiffel Tower, standing tall with a background of an afternoon cloudy sky. I just can’t get enough of this view. And that’s the only reason I still here.

The bell rings, finally.

“Awright, that’s it class. I’ll see y’all next week, and do your homework!”

The school came back to life, students in every class run out in excitement. Mostly, they talks about what to do tonight, the lesson that they learned today, and the annoying teachers.

“Man that was a looong day.” I sigh as I say it to myself.

As I walk toward the school gate, I see Firinne, my apartment neighbor and my friend, best friend maybe.

“Hey, Firinne!” I run.

“Pierce? What’s with that face? Did you fell asleep in class again?”

“Not today, thank god.”

“Yeah but I bet you didn’t study at all” He replied with a tone that annoys me.

“Well, sorry I’m not an award winning genius like you.”

Firinne grins, “My, I’m flattered.”

That’s just annoying. Well, I can’t blame him for being so self-centered; he’s the smartest student in school. And yes, I am not. I can barely get a C for my Physics and he have a collection of A+ in his locker. I’m pathetic.

Then, when Firinne continues his long speech about how important high school education is, I see weird people. Err, weird couple. Two girls dressed all black, one with long black hair, and one with short shaggy brown hair.

Well, the girl with the short hair wears glasses, a black blazer, with jeans and boots. The other girl wears a black long coat and jeans too, speaking with the short-haired girl in low voice.

“Pierce, I know you don’t listening. Well, at least I tried to make you realize that…” Whatever.

We now walking pass the two weird girls; I can’t hold myself from staring at them. So, I take a look. For a split-second, my heart stops. The short-haired girl has a pair of shy bluish eyes. But the long-haired girl has one black eye, and another eye, that hidden behind her hair, has the color of crimson blood.

I force myself to turn away, unaware that the long-haired girl stares me back with widened eyes. As I turn away, I can hear a low whisper from the two girls earlier. Now I’m having a bad feeling.

“You saw those girls earlier, Firinne?”

“Huh? The black dressed girls? Well maybe it’s the new fashion for this season or something. Anyway….”

He gives a short reply before continuing his speech.

I’m so got to get new friends.


“You see them, Jesser?”

“Yes, and I can feel it too.”

“We have to follow them!”

“Don’t let them know we’re following them.”

Pierce Finschoth’s Apartment Room, Late Night.

What’s that sound?

Someone’s knocking the door. What kind of stupid person would knock someone else’s door at this time of night?

Feeling disturbed, I struggle to get up from my bed and walk towards the front door.

I never had the chance to open that door.

Following a blinding strike of light, the door breaks out into little pieces. I froze, covering my eyes with my hand.

A black shadow stands in front of my apartment. Not really a shadow, it’s a big tall man wearing black coat that covers his head. I can’t really see his face.

“Pierce Finschoth..?” He speaks with heavy breath.

He walks in, grabs my neck, and speaks again with a small laugh, “What kind of careless person would open his door at this time of night?”

Very funny, at least he got a sense of humor. But I don’t get any chance to laugh, even breathe.

“What the—Let him go!” That’s Firinne, shouting from the hallway. The shadow man turns away.

“I’ll deal with you later.” He stretches his right hand towards Firinne, and another strike of light comes out of it. Wow. Wait, what?

I can feel that he’s grabbing my neck tighter; I can’t breathe for real now. Then, I saw another shadow, two shadows.

“Let him go you bastard!” A girl says with an angry tone. I can’t see the girl, the man strangles me! Then suddenly the air turns cold, freezing air; the man’s grab on my neck become weaker.

Then he just throws me to the floor with extraordinary power, like I was just a piece of wood or something. My only next thought is that his throw might have broken my right arm.

“Wait!” I don’t really see what’s happening, but I can hear the man flees and break my apartment window. It’s 13th floor! How the heck can he do that?

“He’s getting away!” A girl voices again, a different one though.

“Let him go, I’m sure we’ll meet him again.” The first girl I hear says.

I got enough of this madness, I try to get up and ask a million questions to those two strangers. But well, don’t blame me for not even being able to sit straightly after that man throws me like that. The pain…

“Don’t strain yourself.” She says. A short-haired girl that I saw earlier after school, it’s her!

“What—who—when—how” I says as my attempt to make a complete sentence.

“Take it easy, geez.” Another girl, with long black hair and one red eye says as he drags Firinne through the hallway into my room. What the heck are they doing here?

“Is that one alright?” The short-haired girl asks.

“Yeah, he’ll be at least.” The long-haired girl replied as she put Firinne in my apartment floor.

“Man, he’s heavy.” Then she sits on my sofa.

“Hey, you think you can just-“ I finally can make a complete sentence.

“Shush.” The short-haired girl gives me a piercing look.

She pulls her glove; yeah I just realize that she’s wearing gloves, and touch my right arm. Her hand’s so damn cold.

“Your arm will be fine too. That’s good, less trouble for us.” She sighs.


“Shut up… Can we go now?” The long-haired girl seems annoyed.

“Yeah.” The other girl replies as they walk together to the hallway. Then she turns to me.

“Sorry about the door though, oh and we’ll see you tomorrow at school.”

And that was the weirdest night in my life so far.


“So, where will we sleep tonight…? Hey, Haku?”


“What’s wrong?”


“It has something to do with that man, right? You know him? A Lightning and Thunder Elementer…”

“No... I’m not sure.”

“…Alright, forget it then. Ok? Hey, I heard that Champs-Élysées looks beautiful at this time of night…”

Will Warren International High School, Paris, France, Last Period.

-Pierce’s Point Of View-

And here I am again. After all the commotion last night, today seems just like another normal school day. The last lesson today is the eccentric Mr. Riordan’s Physic Class.

Mr. Lucas Riordan is the coolest teacher here, with his mad-scientist hair and insanely huge goggles hanging around his neck, unusual sense of humor, and long white coat, he’s awesome.

Too bad the bell rings before he can show the class his awesome experiment with rocket fuel. He drops his ‘homemade rocket fuel’ into the trash bin beside the class’s door.

“Well, seems like it’s all the time we got today class! See you soon, and do your homework! And oh, someone please call the janitor and tell him to bring a new trash bin. This one’s melting.” He says as he lifts the trash bin and rush outside.

Despite the trash bin incident, today’s school was boring. I would have fallen asleep if I don’t think so much about what happened last night. So, I drag Firinne to the school gate and we decide to wait for the two strange girls.

“You think they’ll come?” He asks me.

“They better be.”

And we wait…..

“You sure they’ll come?” He asks me again.

“Firinne, we’ve just waited here for five minutes.” And so he decides to keep his mouth shut.

“That’s them right?” I says as I see a girl in black walking past the school gate and peek inside.

“Oh, there they are.” She says. Then she walks in with her friend.

“So, who—“

“Can we talk somewhere else?”

“Uh, how about the yard behind the school?”

“Sounds promising, let’s go.”

And so we walk together to the yard. I can feel chill runs down my spine, I have a bad feeling.

“My name,” the long-haired girl says even before I can ask. “Is Hakurou Louritsiky.” I can’t pronounce that name!

“This is my friend, Jesser Serenade. We’ve been following you …”

“And why is that?” I finally can ask a question.

“Because you both have the aura of an elementer, and we can feel it.” The girl named Jesser says. An el… what?

“Elementer.” Hakurou speaks, “Is a person that can control and create the power of a certain element.” Then she stretches her palm and a glowing red fire comes out.

At that moment, I know that everything that will happen to me and Firinne after this will nothing like our normal school life again.


Done chapter one, hope you like it! xD

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